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Re: Debating Religion
I'd just like to pop in and mention that I'm an agnostic Buddhist. And on a more relevant note concerning what's currently being discussed, I think some of these comments ...
Feb 16, 2013 -
Re: Not Quite Perfect
Not Quite Perfect Ruby constructs her own perfect ending. --- This is it. Ruby stands on top of the world on a Sunday. Beads of sweat are gathered at the ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Losing Myself in You
losing myself in you [Karen looks for beauty tucked away in corners of dark alleyways and empty parks at dawn. Noah looks for something else in soft-sung words and the ...
Jun 23, 2011 -
Re: The Brothers of Love (1)
Hello there Cassie! I'd like to start off this review by letting you know that I have nothing against 'Vampire Stories', nor do have anything against 'Vampire Love Stories'. And ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: First Friend
To my dearest friend. First Friend We’re friends right? Nuh-Uh! ********************************************************************************************************* It was a cold winter’s day
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Blaire Lake
Welcome to Young Writer's Society Madeline! (See, see, I'm writing out the site's full name as a sign of well... thoughtfulness! I'm quite sure you know its full name though ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Over Coffee
Beware, for there lies a cuss word ahead. *** Over Coffee 'Threads of Fate' was a rather small structure situated in front of the bustling main road of Calcrete City, ...
Feb 6, 2010 -
Re: Rain
Well, I guess it kind of is my fault that I'm a bit vague here and there, so I'll try to clear a few things up. @sugarxsnow: Because there was ...
Feb 4, 2010 -
Re: Breakfast Troubles - Sunny Side Up!
This was a rather nice story, I enjoyed the bit of humour you incorporated in it (because honestly speaking here, YWS needs more humour) The 'flow' of your story, I ...
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: The Lifespan Of A Butterfly
Wow, that was - to simply put it - amazing. The imagery that you evoked was one of magical wonder and I found myself transfixed. “Come on,” I told him, ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: What does this username make you think of?
A short man with a stubble who walks around clad in a purple bathrobe. Ludicrously Idiotic
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Rain
@LoVeLeSs: *Laughs nervously* I guess I was a little bit over eager. Well, fortunately I have (somewhat) rectified the 'two reviews before you post' problem (not technically but at least ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Left behind
The story was interesting, though I think you could've spruced it up a bit more, maybe provide I bit more insight into the characters through gestures and thought process rather ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Crisp and Clean
I enjoyed this story. Nice and morbid, just the way I like it. A retired Janitor named John May sat drinking and smoking on his front porch Not much of ...
Jan 1, 2010 -
Re: Rain
Damnit Microsoft! I don't care if 'foresty' isn't a word! *Roars* I'LL MAKE IT A WORD! ... Well, I guess I wouldn't call this one of the best first impressions ...
Jan 1, 2010
